I liked it.
Well. It started off looking like it was gonna be crap. Especially as it got the underdog slot.
But actually, I liked it. A lot in fact.
Sure, a lot of elements were unprofessional, such as the text, the over the top loud sound effects and music (make them quieter) and the compression wasn't too great either.
But seriously. Stick at it. One day you'll be a top sprite animator, and if yo move on to other stuff, you'll be good at that too. Just work more on presentation. Add definition and make the text less boring and more noticeable. Also, better plots are good.
Overall though, some very nice sprite work. Good ideas and a promising outlook on your flash career.
Well done!